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The boy was frozen.

He was no statue or enchanted being. He want frozen by a curse or anything in the realm of our imaginations. It wasn't even because of the ice cold rain that drenched him to the bone.

The boy was frozen because of what he saw.

His green eyes were locked on the thing with a child like curiosity through the drenched strands of dark hair that dripped down his face. Hs pale, mud stained dress shirt had faded to a light brownish tan from the rain. His mouth hung half open as he saw what he saw, rain running down his face and getting into his mouth every now and then. He held his right hand in front of him so he could easier see the thing he was looking at.

He was looking at the fairy.

The gentle little person looked like she was made of water, made of the rain that fell around them. She was just now landing on the boy's palm, gently alighting there on one foot, her hand stretched his way. Her plain dress fluttered int the breeze even though it too seemed like water, and her semi-transparent butterfly wings dripped water off them at each flap. He cocked her head, returning the boy's look of curiosity with two small, rounded eyes of pale grey.as her foot touched the boy's hand, her skin rippled. The boy gasped slightly at the fairy's gentle, cool touch.

They both knew this was the start of something great.
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So, as you can probably see with the pic, the pic does not belong to me. It belongs to :iconalien-piglet: and can be found here: [link]

So, seeing this picture just sorta inspired thi writing.... I don't think this will be going anywhere story wise... So don't look for it. I just had to share what I was inspired to share. =.="

Anywho, thanks, :iconalien-piglet: for the inspiration~
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~SilverEyeShinobi Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely :) Great little short story :D I'd reread this yourself though :/ there's a few errors there... Other than that, it was wonderful! :happybounce:
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~Crysi102 Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lol~ of course there are bound to be errors...i never proofread... ^^;

glad you like it though~
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~SilverEyeShinobi Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haa, I usually just write a whole bunch of chapters and go back to them later to fix them up XD if it's a short story, I come back later. And my short stories are...well... not short O.O
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~Crysi102 Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
that's how i am~ I have one draft that's like... i don't know... twenty or so chapters, and not one of them are revised~ XD
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~SilverEyeShinobi Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL. Well I personally like revising because I just like reading my own stories :/ I mean that may sound narcissistic, but when it comes down to it, there are some things I want to read, and I can never find them... So I write about it! XD and then because I know what the story is about, and I like what the story is about, I'll just read it XD ah, I sound silly don't I? QAQ
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~Crysi102 Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
oh no, i do that too~ XD i have so many stories fluttering around and i love reading them again~ i just never have the time to revise them and only a few are on my computer, so it makes it hard to revise them... :/ but i totally get the reading your own stories again thing~ don't worry, you don't sound silly~ XD
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~SilverEyeShinobi Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah phew... Thank goodness :phew:
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~Crysi102 Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lol~ XD
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